Wednesday, October 10, 2012

Don't Worry, be Hapi


Don't Worry, be Hapi
"Authors Note:
This piece is about the cause and effect in the story The Serpent's Shadow. I wrote this to demonstrate my understanding  of cause and effect."

In my book The Serpent's Shadow by Rick Riordan one event in this book is a giant hippo attack, which is a person vs. nature battle. As Zia, Setne and Carter are traveling down the Nile River wondering why Apophis hasn't tried to kill them yet it hit them, I mean literally hit them.They ran into a humongous hippo. After the hippo gets hit by Carter's boat it unleashed its anger by adding huge destruction to the boat. Before the hippo could destroy the boat Carter calls on Hapi, the god of the Nile who picks up the hippo and throws it with ease to destroy it.

If there wouldn't have been this event their would have been a lot of effects missing. For example Carter, his friends and his boat wouldn't have got a free ride to the ruins they need to visit. Also Carter wouldn't have learned a new spell from Setne on how to call upon Hapi. Zia also took a beating when she was trying to stay afloat and in doing this she lost a lot of energy to cast spells. Finally Carter's boat wouldn't have had any damage and they would have kept strolling down the river which would have been just plain old boring. Overall if this event wouldn't have been in the book it would have been missing a lot of action and I would actually want to stop reading it.

2 comments:

  1. You made it clear so it was easy to read

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  2. You explained it well and didn't add unimportant details to it. One thing I noticed though was that you didn't really talk about an alternative to it.

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