Tyler Kiser
11/14/12
Mrs. Reagels 5th
Hour
Predictions
Score on Reading Rubric
H.I.V.E
“Author’s Note:
This piece is about H.I.V.E.
I wrote this to demonstrate my understanding of predictions.”
Otto
and Wing are finally starting to settle in at H.I.V.E even though there are
many things they are unsure about from people such as Dr. Nero to that they may
be stuck there for 6 years. Then to add
on since the beginning of the book Otto has been complaining and starting
fights with many people, which is very unpromising for Otto’s future because at
H.I.V.E they run a tight shift and no time for goofing off.
As the book will progress I think
many things are going to change for Otto and Wing, since Dr. Nero and his
assistance Contessa have been talking about him behind his back. Otto has even
taken out two henchmen in training with ease. This makes me believe that when
the book progresses Otto is going to try to convince Wing to rage against
H.I.V.E and plot an escape(“After all, if they don’t come up with a plan and do
something about their current situation, they’ll have six long years to find
out about each other.”) to
get out of the camp. Also I believe he will do this because since he was forced
to go to H.I.V.E against his will he will want revenge on whoever gave
permission for him to go. He will do this because Otto is a person that doesn’t
back away and cowers but fights back and seeks revenge. Finally Wing will want
to plot against H.I.V.E because he will always back up his friends even if it isn’t a good cause to fight for or to
believe in.
A person in my opinion that is
related to Otto and Wing are Percy and Jason from The Lost Hero and The
Son of Neptune, both by: Rick Riordan. They are both similar because in The
Lost Hero and The Son of Neptune both
Percy and Jason lose their memory and get taken to each other’s camp just like
Otto and Wing are took to H.I.V.E and their memory is swiped as well. Finally
all of the Characters want to get their old lives back, get their memory back,
and get their own freedom back.
In H.I.V.E by: Mark Walden I truly believe Otto and
Wing will up rise against H.I.V.E even though they just got there because Otto
has already been singled out by Dr. Nero and not for a good reason. Finally
since they have just arrived I believe they
still have a lot to come before him and Otto are able to escape and have a
window of opportunity to do so.
“Come on we need to get to the H.I.V.E mind’s main base
before they find us,” Otto whispered as they sprinted down the hall.
“Here’s another one,” Wing responded. “Let’s try and make
this one go down silently unlike the other one and the one before that, oh and
that other one and don’t forget that one that screamed and…”
“We get the point already!” Otto said cutting off Wing. As
Otto grabs the guard from behind covering his mouth Wing gives him an uppercut
to the left jaw, knocking him right to the ground.
“Now was that hard? No, now let’s go!” Otto enthusiastically
shouts when they finally reach the H.I.V.E database. “Here it is,” said Otto in
astonishment.
When H.I.V.E mind woke up the first thing he did was
instantly try to turn on the alarms but failed.
“What are you doing, why won’t my alarms go off!” H.I.V.E
shouted impatiently.
“We thought ahead,” Otto explained. “Listen H.I.V.E mind
remember how you told me you weren’t happy, while I have a proposal; if you let
us escape and give a helicopter to get out we will shut you down, which will
give you freedom or you can your mind onto my laptop and you will be free.
Deal?”
“Deal,” H.I.V.E responded. “Let’s go and our sorry butts out
of here!”
