Monday, September 24, 2012

Retelling of Red Pyramid


"Authors Note:
This piece is about the retelling in the story The Red Pyramid. I wrote this to demonstrate my understanding  of retelling"

Two kids and their dad have got together for a normal Christmas Eve. All of them go to visit the Rosetta Stone in the New York museum but soon enough things go wrong and their dad blows it up, releasing all the the gods. One god that gets released is Set, the god of evil and chaos who wants to destroy the world and  after the two kids travel to the Red Pyramid they send him back to the duat with one death defying battle.

Friday, September 21, 2012

DWA

Lefty Hook

"Authors Note:
This piece is about the DWA. I wrote this to demonstrate my understanding  of the DWA."
            “John get out there and do your stuff!” Exclaimed Couch Wang. “Let’s put this game in the books!”
“Ok couch I’m putting this one out of here,” John responded.
            As he approached the plate you could hear the fans cheering, shouting and screaming for him. John reaches the batter’s box and he calls for time well he settles into the plate. There are two outs, top of the ninth, there is a man on second and third, and the score is 5-4 with the Rangers on top. John has now settled in and he has one goal and one goal only, to send this team back to the drawing boards.
            The pitcher winds up and delivers a hot one right on the outside corner for a strike. The next pitch comes in and is a nasty curve that drops into the dirt. The pitcher now comes with a lefty hook and John smashes this one over the center field wall! It’s up and out of here the crowd is on their feet as John trots around the bases. He touches home and get bombarded by his teammates.
            “Way to put that one out of here,” Couch Wang encourages.
“Now let’s finish this game off!” John says as he fires up the team.
            The game results in a victory for the Rangers winning 8-4 over the Demons.
The playoffs have finally come to a close for the Rangers because it is now time for the game they have all worked hard for, the championship.
            As dawn breaks the Rangers have all been ready and waiting for the big game to start. As the game nears the players all approach the warm-up field and soon before they knew it the game has begun. The Rangers start their lefty pitcher, Robert who has a nasty lefty hook and has a ERA of 2.3. The Giants start their pitcher who has a 3.0 ERA.
            The Giants take the field first and the pitcher sends the opening delivery, a high heater for a strike.
            As the game begun it got off to an abundant start with Rangers scoring 2 and the Giants scoring 3. The game was then moving quick and soon it became a pitcher’s duel with the two best pitcher in the league. Every inning was turning into a one, two, three inning, but when the Giants were in the field their pitcher hyper-extended his arm when throwing a curve and unfortunately he was out for the game.
The game was finally coming to a close and the hopes for the Rangers winning were very slim as we approached the ninth inning with the score, Rangers-3,  Giants-5. The first two batters arrive at the plate with one of them getting a infield single and another hitting a sacrifice fly into the outfield to advance the runner. Now with one out Robert steps up to the plate and he get’s nice and relaxed. The pitcher throws and Robert hits it right back up the gut to advance the runner. Now with two men on John comes up to bat looking as confident as ever with his determined look as he stares down the pitcher. The pitcher sends a cutter, but leaves it hanging and John jacks it out of here! It’s gone homerun! The Rangers take the lead by one and when the next batter comes to the plate he flies out center field. Now with two outs a new batter approaches the plate but can’t perform and strikes out.
Bottom of the ninth with the Giants at bat losing by one. Robert, the Rangers lefty pitcher has to finish this game and win it all for his team and all he has to do is get three more outs. The first batter comes looking fearful of Rodger because of his amazing movement on his pitches and his dominate speed on his fastball. He winds up and delivers two fastballs for strikes. He then he sends him down with his cutter that drops off the tables. One out, with the game still on the line their number one batter comes in and takes a walk and same does the number two batter and the number four batter. Now with two outs and the bases loaded Robert can either send this team away or hand it to them but with the number five batter set and ready he delivers a slider for a swinging strike. He fires a change-up in there now and the batter completely whiffs. Robert is ahead in the count 0-2 so he throws his specialty pitch and as it comes in and hooks out, the batter swings! It’s all over he got him with the famous lefty hook!